I looked up at the starry night and sighed. Tomorrow it would be hard to tidy away this sanctuary that Charlie had built for me. I shut my eyes but then I heard him moving behind me.
‘Come to bed,’ he whispered.
‘Okay,’ I mumbled.
We crawled inside the tent and lay in each others’ arms. He kissed my head and said, ‘Sophie, will you marry me?’
I looked up in shock as he held out his great grandmother’s wedding ring.
‘Yes!’ I cried and slipped the ring on.
And so ended my perfect summer.
I was confused by “so ended my perfect summer”, Did you mean it destroyed the perfection? (I don’t think so) or that it encapsulated it?
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Encapsuated. But I can understand why it might read the other way.
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Another proposal story. Camping is so romantic.
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Thanks. That’s so true!
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Lovely story !
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Thanks. π
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Young love.Or have I read it wrong?
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You read it right.
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Dear Hayley,
That’s certainly a good way to end the summer. Good one. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. π
Shalom,
Rochele
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Thanks, Rochele. Glad you liked it.
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Awww. Nice.
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This tent has sparked a lot of romance. Sweet.
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Thanks. Glad you liked it. π
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